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Winning freelancing proposal for getting more clients

Started by rdutta123, May 21, 2016, 12:56:22 AM

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rdutta123

Hi there!!!

I am a freelancer by career. I work in a company as BDE. I want to know what is my fault/lack I don't get so many response and client too.

Proposal sample:
Hello,
We can help you to develop an online marketplace for you to showcase & sell your fashion products globally will increase your site visitors as well business leads and revenue, as per your requirements. Have a look at our multi-seller online marketplaces:
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Have a look at our single-seller online marketplaces:
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Have a look at our online marketplaces for digital products:
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Have a look at our product showcase sites:
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Listing down the users type & core functionality for your project, please let me know if changes required:
A.Admin Functionality:    
-Member Management
-Category Management
-Products Management
-Order Management
-Inventory Management
-Advertisement & News Management
-Content Management
-Dispute Management
-Payment Management
B.Buyer Functionality:
-Registration & Create Profile
-Address Book
-My Purchase
-My Orders
-Message Board
-Rating & Review System
-Watchlist
-Checkout/Shopping Cart
-Dispute
C.Front-end Functionality:
-Sign up requires admin approval & log in
-Search & Browse Product
-Featured & Best Selling Product
-Products details page
-Seller's public profile
-Static pages creation
-Advertisements
-Fees deduction
-Showing reviews
-News section
-Payment gateway.

Your feedback will be highly appreciated.


please knowing me how i write best proposal so any client response my each bid..

DJ RONY

Is this for any specific job proposal? Can you copy paste the job advertisement?

For each job you need to write a new proposal. It all depends on the job advertised.

If you are writing a cover letter you need to be more to the point and organized.
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rdutta123

That is the one eCommerce proposal for specifically freelancer portal. I follow the pointwise I get the reply many cases . but I want more accurate if you send me your few proposal sample that is very grateful to you

DJ RONY

I can't advise much on the given description.  :'(

So, you submitted a proposal for building e-commerce site. This is what I understood.

You need to improve your English a bit. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistake.

Try to use a editor like "Grammarly" it's free. It will help.

Also arranging the example site and Core functionality a little more noticeable will do better.

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Hi/ Hello,

.......... YOUR INTRODUCTORY SENTENCES HERE.............. Check our previously built sites/demos.

EXAMPLE SITES:
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1. .......
2. .....
3. ......
4. .....

Core functionality we are thinking of:-

1. Admin Functionality:
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List them here.

2. Buyer Functionality:
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List them here.

3. Front-end Functionality:
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List them here.

Please do not list anything unless it is necessary.

2-3 more lines to ask for details or point of contact

End with a regards............

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This is not a bad format actually. But the context all depends on the job advertised. As, I said earlier, there are many factors depends on what you should write.
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tamal.anwar

Hi, after reading a few lines, it is clear to me that it's a template cover letter.

You have to write original cover letters each and every time.

Keep trying but always change and improve the letter.

Write as it is a friendly email, not just some boring resume.

Learn some copywriting and try to pursued the reader.

Here is an excellent answer about writing winning cover letters:

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DJ RONY

Exactly. Every job demands you write differently. Unless you are providing with the job advertisement I can't be sure, how to reply that.

Follow the advice Tamal mentioned.
I do what I love, Money Comes on the Way.