Winning freelancing proposal for getting more clients

[rdutta123]

Hi there!!!

I am a freelancer by career. I work in a company as BDE. I want to know what is my fault/lack I don't get so many response and client too.

Proposal sample:
Hello,
We can help you to develop an online marketplace for you to showcase & sell your fashion products globally will increase your site visitors as well business leads and revenue, as per your requirements. Have a look at our multi-seller online marketplaces:
http://mixedbazar.com    
http://delybazar.com
   
Have a look at our single-seller online marketplaces:
http://shoptheluxuryplus.com
http://ayurda.co.nz
Have a look at our online marketplaces for digital products:
http://picswish.com
http://textbookpoint.co.uk
Have a look at our product showcase sites:
http://9to5seating.com
http://hennypenny.com

Listing down the users type & core functionality for your project, please let me know if changes required:
A.Admin Functionality:    
-Member Management
-Category Management
-Products Management
 -Order Management
-Inventory Management
-Advertisement & News Management
-Content Management
 -Dispute Management
-Payment Management
B.Buyer Functionality:
 -Registration & Create Profile
-Address Book
 -My Purchase
-My Orders
 -Message Board
 -Rating & Review System
-Watchlist
-Checkout/Shopping Cart
 -Dispute
 C.Front-end Functionality:
 -Sign up requires admin approval & log in
-Search & Browse Product
 -Featured & Best Selling Product
-Products details page
-Seller’s public profile
 -Static pages creation
-Advertisements
-Fees deduction
-Showing reviews
-News section
 -Payment gateway.

Your feedback will be highly appreciated.


please knowing me how i write best proposal so any client response my each bid..

[delwar]

Is this for any specific job proposal? Can you copy paste the job advertisement?

For each job you need to write a new proposal. It all depends on the job advertised.

If you are writing a cover letter you need to be more to the point and organized.

[rdutta123]

That is the one eCommerce proposal for specifically freelancer portal. I follow the pointwise I get the reply many cases . but I want more accurate if you send me your few proposal sample that is very grateful to you

[delwar]

I can't advise much on the given description. 

So, you submitted a proposal for building e-commerce site. This is what I understood.

You need to improve your English a bit. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical mistake.

Try to use a editor like "Grammarly" it's free. It will help.

Also arranging the example site and Core functionality a little more noticeable will do better.

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Hi/ Hello,

.......... YOUR INTRODUCTORY SENTENCES HERE.............. Check our previously built sites/demos.

EXAMPLE SITES:
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1. .......
2. .....
3. ......
4. .....

Core functionality we are thinking of:-

1. Admin Functionality:
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List them here.

2. Buyer Functionality:
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List them here.

3. Front-end Functionality:
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List them here.

Please do not list anything unless it is necessary.

2-3 more lines to ask for details or point of contact

End with a regards............

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This is not a bad format actually. But the context all depends on the job advertised. As, I said earlier, there are many factors depends on what you should write.

[Tamal Anwar]

Hi, after reading a few lines, it is clear to me that it's a template cover letter.

You have to write original cover letters each and every time.

Keep trying but always change and improve the letter.

Write as it is a friendly email, not just some boring resume.

Learn some copywriting and try to pursued the reader.

Here is an excellent answer about writing winning cover letters:

https://www.quora.com/How-do-I-get-first-project-in-odesk-or-freelancer-website 

[delwar]

Exactly. Every job demands you write differently. Unless you are providing with the job advertisement I can't be sure, how to reply that.

Follow the advice Tamal mentioned.